In the awesome pattern of things you'll receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused everybody ended up being on the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you precisely what did deliver the results. The text can be extremely persuasive and this is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily confident of exactly how you seem to connect your ideas which in turn produce your final result. For now I will subscribe to your position but hope in the future you actually link the facts better.